Saturday, January 28, 2012

"Mortified, Petrified, Stupefied!"


The wound is ripe
To be sliced and consumed
Before it consumes her.
Pardon me for the grotesque imagery
It slipped out
Of my grotesque contemplation
With a deliberate ease and arrogance
Of utmost feminine frailty.
(Can you please compare this
With a Sylvia Plath gloom
Dipped in “black shoe daddy” memories
And battered by a “red heart biting Ted Hughes”?)
My heroine in the poem
Demanded some drama-
Like ”plucked out Oedipus’s eye balls”
Staring at the wound on the empty sockets.
But that would be-
Too “rationally cartoonish”, lively and manly.

The wound is really really ripe,
Yellowish and yellower
And eternally yellow
When the cart wheeled and wheels
Quietly over centuries
With one Sylvia to another
Mortified, petrified, stupefied”-
And mutely brewing inside!
Can it be consumed 
Before it consumes further?



33 comments:

  1. So much of pain in your words
    Feminism upsurge in the utmost silent powerful way!
    As long as misogyny floats, Who will consume, my dear? Isn't it better to sever off the wound, and be free of it? Fire alone can eat away the fire!

    What a classy elegant way of expressing all that was never meant to be expressed! Love you even more <3

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    1. Thanks Pygma:) Now I think my pain flares up every time I go through my own lines...wish I hadn't written it;)

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    2. Remember dear Nasnin, "I dont know them anymore"
      Hugs

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    3. My dearest Pygma.....
      A thousand thanks for these words
      for your concern
      for all these love you are sending me...:)
      I am so so deeply touched...(words are failing me- sometimes it's insufficient...you are a sweet heart;) *hugs*

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  2. Another C.U.B. of a post from you, dear Nasnin! Creative, YOUnique and Brilliant! Giggling at the P.S.! Oh, to spend a day inside of your mind . . . ;) Loved it :-) ♥

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    1. Thanks dear Fiona:) Loved that "YOUnique" there! Regards:)

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  3. “Mortified, petrified, stupefied”-:)

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    1. Wow...A comment out of the title! Thanks a lot Sir! Regards:)

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  4. brilliantly worded.
    nasnin keep up your creative workout.

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  5. I have never seen any one trying to write something like this!! how unique and fresh! and different!! how do u do it?

    the pain the raw human emotions.. the parenthesis..the words in them.. wonderful dear! feeling proud of ur acquaintance..!

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    1. Thanks dear:) I am so tickled by your comment:) Regards:)

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  6. wonderful... i wonder how can you be a male chauvnist? you can be a female chauvnist... but that would be an oxymoron :P

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    1. Yup! Thanks Israr! I am actually a bundle of oxymoron....after all we human beings are an intricate web of opposite forces, incomprehensible and ambivalent isn't it? The poem was just a hangover of "gender studies"...never mind....such things happen in blogosphere you know:P

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    2. nasnin is in the restricted area, ISRAR

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    3. I think I am in the most "unrestrained restricted" area :P

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    4. please expalain to me in simple words :P

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    5. he he...let it be "simply complicated"....Things unexplained have a peculiar beauty:P (Nothing much dear:))

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    1. Update man....Waiting for the new devil post:)

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    2. Oops! I missed your latest one....sorry:)

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    3. no...you missed at least 3 other posts besides the latest one :@

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    4. Oops oops oops....I am really sorry Israr....some of it I think of having a relaxed read and eventually get forgotten...that's what happens;)

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  8. ahh the famous pain and the poignancy!... it strikes a dagger into your heart, if only that dagger could release the pain the hear beholds!

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    1. "I will 'speak' daggers and use none!"....Thanks Stuti:) Now a days daggers aren't sharp enough:) Love, Regards:)

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  9. but this excuse is acceptable from a person like me but not you :P you have to be present everyweek at Misterio Vida and give your opinion otherwise you will be expelled from blogger :P

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  10. he he...OK Israr....since you insists so I will try my best to be more regular on your page:) Pardon me for this time;) (So that's means you value my feedback that much...wow...:)) Now stop threatening me:P

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    1. of course your comments are very precious... there are a few people whom i wish keep on commenting on my blog and i enjoy reading them :)

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  11. he he...OK Israr....since you insists so I will try my best to be more regular on your page:) Pardon me for this time;) (So that means you value my feedback that much...wow...:)) Now stop threatening me:P

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  12. You are getting more creative day by day..hope to visit back soon

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