Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Not as Bewitching as HER Beauty in HIS Eyes

Seething pressure cooker and scintillating coffee fumes
She raises her hands to the cupboard in search of sugar
“Why you up so early?”
 His voice still embracing the late night’s sleep
Still sniffing to get a whiff of her scent.
“Take me to the park…”
“Longing for a walk?”
“Longing since our love was a child”
“Alone?”                                           
“No…with you!”
“Everything with me as usual!”

As he pulled her hard towards him
Her hands still wanted to search for -
Sugar and tea cups
Butter and butterflies
Romeo and Juliet!

She purposefully dodged the thought of park and the walk
And bit the surfacing reservations to his kisses  
For next to her conscience in the park and the prolonging walk
There was a Narcissus’s lake
Which reflects her beauty
Only to make her know that
It’s not worth jumping!
It’s not as bewitching as HER beauty in HIS eyes!
    

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15 comments:

  1. pygmalionOctober 9, 2013 at 12:21 PM

    Nasnin, you are back ! a different theme, which i feel u haven't taken before. Really loved it. This is what it is all about !
    I love your writing .. do write often

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    1. Nasnin NasserOctober 10, 2013 at 9:25 AM

      Thanks Pygma:) I wish to write often...it's just that the mind for it comes when it is least expected and goes when it's most expected:)

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  2. Rahul BhatiaOctober 9, 2013 at 9:16 PM

    Good to see you back after a long time Nasneen! The last line says it all:)

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    1. Nasnin NasserOctober 10, 2013 at 9:31 AM

      Thanks a lot Sir:) Feeling so glad to see you here even after the long dormancy of my page :)

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  3. suma rajeevOctober 9, 2013 at 10:13 PM

    Welcome Back...Simple & sweet...loved it..:)

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  4. AnonymousOctober 10, 2013 at 3:09 AM

    Good to see you start writing again.

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  5. UnknownOctober 12, 2013 at 11:00 PM

    Enthralling :)

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  6. jovanOctober 19, 2013 at 11:36 PM

    hey nas,any autobiographical element to be related with this????:)

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    1. Nasnin NasserOctober 24, 2013 at 3:38 AM

      May be :P You better do a research on the author :P

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  7. Akhila V NairOctober 21, 2013 at 3:14 AM

    Hi nasu whether it is the reflection of your life itself?? Anyway nice theme, go ahead.. :)

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  8. AnonymousNovember 3, 2013 at 9:54 AM

    Confused about the ending though

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  9. keerthiJanuary 25, 2014 at 7:27 PM

    good one nasu!:) very much in love..:)

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